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From the Painting Guide: I don't mind the halo, I just think it's too deep and looks odd because of this. The halo also ends abruptly, in a hard edge; I find it hard to believe it wouldn't blend into the sky more, being an atmospheric effect. The length of the reflection of the sun seems too long to me; I would've expected a bright yellow area which then fades out. But then again reality is sometimes very strange; I always thought Turner's sunset paintings (which you should look at for ideas/inspiration if you're not already familiar with them) were a bit over-the-top, till I walked along the Thames in London one misty day while the sun was setting and saw a red ball of fiery sky straight out of one of Turner's sunsets! As for cars, I think they'd be a distraction that would draw your attention away from the bridge and sunset.
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