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Rusty and Buck, Good Buds by Charlene Corman-Brooks
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© Charlene Corman-Brooks 2003, 9x12", watercolour

From the Artist: "Rusty and Buck followed me for a walk in the woods last fall and I took several photos for reference. I sketched my horses with pencil and used layers of watercolour washes, beginning with yellow orchre, and blue in the sky, and finished details as the mane with colored pencils."

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From the Painting Guide: This is a lovely dual portrait, particularly of the white horse (I'm guessing Buck) where the deceptively simple washes against the areas left white have created such a magnificent, three-dimensional feeling. Composition wise, the two horses are beautifully placed -- they dominate the painting as you'd expect, but balance each other while at the same time having 'space' on the right-hand side to look into. I'm presuming that Rusty's face has been cut off at the bottom when you squared up the photo, because otherwise it makes for a strange composition. Also that there's more of the tree trunk on the left than just that sliver, for the same reason.

One thing I do find incongruous however, is the shadow of the tree in the foreground which is slightly lighter in tone than the surrounding ground/leaves; I'd expect it to be darker.


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